All Comments on 'Balls on the Line'

That was rather disturbing, actually. Still, I read all of it for some reason.

Maybe I'm a pervert as well.

quite an interesting story. i would love to see marc regain his manhood and walk out on the cunt leaving her with less than a man jake

I liked this story, Marc obviously has some fetishes that he didn't realize and is slowly accepting the reality that he enjoys it but doesn't fully understand why yet.

the girl friend and the idiot but are subject to so many criminal and civil actions its completely insane. You ditch the bitch, or kill her, either works. And you put the other one out, docs have access to the chems right, and remove his gentalia and leave him in an alley in a very undesirable part of town. End of both there stories...... or if you dont have the guys, you are already ruined, walk into the room and shoot both of them over and over......

Your story is well-written and devilishly perverted -great!

Please keep writing.

I would have called the cops and arrest those two evil assholes...

So when is chapter 2, 3, 4 coming? When will he be tied down, ass pussy up? Having three bi studs stretch and break in his pussy and breed him as he sucks cock after cock and swallows? As it is captured on video. Him begging for more and afterwords craving more of it? Come on, don't leave us hanging. Your doing well, keep going

"Where do you want this killin' done?Out there on Highway 61." Bye,bye,Jake! Bye,bye,Nancy!

Yeah, absolutely not. I would have killed both of them that same night.

Disturbing best friend and girlfriend ,he is screamed they turn cuckhold him,next another feminize him he lost his manhood you know both his friend and girlfriend brought his inner slut outside it was hidden inside his mind..