All Comments on 'Bank Teller Turned Hooker Ch. 03'

And nothing yet. Hopefully sometime soon.

1 star

DragonRider55

Sorry that you're disappointed with the pace of my story. But my experience was not like a porno with a 4some starting during the first 60 seconds of Scene 1.

I feel it is as important to share how my life story came to be, not so much to delve right into the sex that occurred.

I assure you the sexual tension comes to a head at the end of Chapter 4 and becomes even more prominent in the subsequent chapters.

When you consider giving a 1 Star rating to my writings, or anyone else's writings, you should be providing your rating not solely on content, but also to the overall quality of writing.

Thank you for your comment.

I’m still reading your story so I have to say I like it ... a lot!

Cheers

Lance

Nice build up.

Enjoying your story. It is well written. The build up, setting the scene, is good. There are plenty of stories that go straight to the sex, for those that want that. In my opinion your approach makes the sex scenes all the more exciting when they come. Looking forward to reading part4.