All Comments on 'Bar Circle C Ranch Ch. 03'

There were so many typos that I stopped reading halfway through. Please use an editor, or at the very least, spell check. It really detracts from the story when the writing is this sloppy.

Very hot scene, well written, cannot wait to see where this goes .

Good start, and I hope you keep at it. But yes, please get an editor. And please learn how to use quotation marks... It distracts from the story.