All Comments on 'Barbie and Ken, a Modern Love Story Ch. 03'

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ju8streadingju8streadingabout 4 years ago

this story is seriously strange

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Never continue

This was truly awful. The story line, the technical writing skills (or lack thereof) and the thoroughly unlikable characters add up to a zero.

1 star only because negative stars aren't yet available.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
This travesty

Was concluded when you started it.

TatankaBillTatankaBillabout 4 years ago
I like it.

I'm not sure where it started- probably in this chapter- but your series began to remind me vaguely of "Going After Cacciato". It's fascinating, your story. I'd have loved to discover it just as you finished so I could read it straight through. I'm sure I'll re-read it from start to finish eventually. Do keep submitting chapters. I'm hooked!

26thNC26thNCabout 4 years ago

Strange, but actually interesting. Looking forward to your conclusion.

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Mary Ramsey is a blogger, artist, and writer. She served in the United States Air Force and has a BA degree in Cinema. Although she was born in California, her work in the military took her all over the world including the diverse Midwest, from the beautiful landscapes of the ...