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by TheRedChamber

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

wow.. a welcome one from left field.

5*

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

You have a very readable style. Very engaging. I found myself interested and completed the story, which doesn't happen often. The sex seemed to interest you least, because it was very matter of fact ('I started fucking her') without much description. This story felt like it had too much heart to be in Erotic Couplings but keeping my attention without any steamy scenes is a credit to your ability.

Five stars.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Powerful

Left lots of things unsaid. But very clear. Respect the reader.

Nice

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

You need to proof read your writing, there were so many annoying errors and omissions I could not get into the story

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