by My Erotic Tale
OMG how can this still exist? It should have rotted away in putrescence ages ago, or pulled down out of embarrassment. Grammar, syntax, punctuation, all are crippled herein.
See above!
What a very great pity! I had hopes for this author but as soon as I started on the first reading the total abandonment of any form of spelling, punctuation and syntax totally spoilt it for me. I will go elsewhere and leave you-all to deal with it as you will!
I don't understand the praise. I don't want to drown in cum when I make love.
I did enjoy the story and hope that the other writers will be able to match the voice and spirit.
Wow! every man's dream. What a job, love the benefits. I went to a Nudist colony once and observed two young girls in the river and my willie reacted too. It is frowned upon though. But I keep dreaming.
Rion
I see the company is going to be a dirty one. LOL
This first chapter is a good start for an interesting chain.
What a fantastic idea for a story line. Leave it to Art to come up with a winning story.
I have heard it all now, I loved the way this story is laid out and look forward to the other stories. I would make the story with more SEX. But this story was a delight.
S~
YEE HAW!! You wild'Stang you! LOL;)
great beggining and a hard act for me to follow with chapter 2...ps we began our stories in the same way...same time of day too! LOL Great minds think alike i guess.;)
can't wait for your next one!!