All Comments on 'Bare, Prone, and Waiting 01: Hers'

Having read both parts of the story it could easily be two entirely different scenes, His Version comes across as possessive but still romantic whereas Her Version comes across with her as a prostitute with a customer. It’s not anything that she wants:

“… so it would happen whether she changed her mind or not. ” That indicates a woman with a burden to be fulfilled. She wasn’t sure about the implement to be used. She was surprised at the end that she managed to sleep. Just prior to falling asleep she seemed frantic that she was missing a sign from him that he wanted sex.

Overall it’s pretty confusing.

Thanks for sharing, Tess (uk)

This is the D/s dynamic at its finest and I’ve only read the her side. Experience allows me to relate to her reactions, pauses, timidity and self doubt. Nice short…!!