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All Comments on 'Barmaid Gets Her Wish Spectacularly'

by Satsumabook123

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

There’s half a story here… needs more detail and more inclusion of vocabulary. Otherwise it sounds like a readers wives letter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago
Brevity - the soul of wit.

And a fine companion to eros.

NipkorNipkor10 months ago

Can't imagine why she gave up the job , quite a nice story line

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I am a very amateur writer. For a couple of years I wrote lots of stories just for fun, not showing them to anyone else. While I do make every effort the stories will contain many errors as I am dyslexic.The stories will never win any awards but I hope that many of them will b...