by Kellog
It works SOO much better as just a story between Kevin and Joey. The gangbangs, her fucking other guys, and especially the incest are all un-needed elements to the story that do nothing but take you away from the fact that Kevin and Joey have real feelings for each other.
and that's if you're grading against everything else Kellog has done. His stories are indeed fantastic in situations, but they all deliver in a big way. Feelings can come later.
So sayeth Vic TG