All Comments on 'Bastard, You Fucking Bastard!'

It's a decent start with a good idea. My only real criticism is that you need to work on your punctuations, you had a few to many run on sentences

Loved it. Short the way I like them. Follow it up with more every day or 2. Leave us waiting but wanting more but not to ling for 2nd one.

Liked it some more please

Great into but felt a bit rushed to me. Longer stories are normally my thing 2-3 page. If you could find a middle ground of the way you write with longer stories i would definitely become a regular reader

Loved it. Maybe a part 2 where she confesses to her husband, and he forgives her with a wild sex romp into the night.

It was a good storyline, it lead up a good ending. I think a second part could lead to interesting action, maybe the third could bring back Don with his domineering wife.

The premise of the story was good but the writing was so bad I couldn’t enjoy it. It started in the third person but morphed into the first person midway through. Capitalization and punctuation was haphazard at best. Anything worth doing is worth doing well. Use Grammarly or a volunteer editor for your next submission.

so awesome

would love to hear more

Good story. I'd make it a 3-way with Mom, Dad and Dallas. As for the critical comments about punctuation and tenses, don't take it too much to heart. Most writing here is really crappy. Yours is OK. It takes practice.

Nice story. I liked it. Please do a part 2. Maybe in part 2 dad gets the daughter pregnant.

More of a Loving Wives kind of story. I will read the next chapter, but it will need to include a confession to the husband for me to go further than that. Interested to see how you un-fuck the boss....

Typical, dealing with rumors with vengeance and emotions, no looking for the truth, no logical thought whatsoever, and then when she finds out the truth not a ounce of remorse or thought of asking for forgiveness. Now both the mother and daughter are colluding to hide the truth. Both deserve to be abandoned in the divorce that should follow.

I actually enjoyed the writing style for the most part, but I don't count this as incest. 2/5 for this one.

I definitely would like a part 2

Yes definitely I would love to see a second chapter Great story. 5stars

Nicely done. Don’t understand why one commenter says a mother and daughter having sex isn’t incest. This could go in several directions, but explaining to the husband and involving the daughter could be an interesting challenge. Thanks

Loved it.. absolutely loved it!

It’s bad, so many poorly spelled words, names that aren’t capitalised, random words like marriage that are capitalised, more missing apostrophe’s than I can count.

Absolutely fabulous, more and mor of this please and soon the family fucking and sucking each other, and then Penny joining in. Absolutely loved it. Cunt crazed fucker Lanc,s U.K.

It’s an okay story. You spent a lot of text, building up her guilt. Then just dropped it without addressing how Bill dealt with it.

Why is it, at least in many similar stories, the wife immediately goes and tucks another guy when she only suspects her husband is cheating.

All the errors don't sing a lot of praises for the editor mentioned at the beginning. The editor needs an editor.

As far as the story, it was too short to really get into the story or care about any of the character. The daughters little bomb at the end was about the only thing worth reading.

what a little vixen Dallas is

Why did you end it so abruptly? I wanted to see what the daughter did with he daddy!