All Comments on 'Bath'

Sweet, romantic, and with good sentiment, the story suffered greatly from spelling and punctuation errors. If you can't edit it yourself, please find an editor or shoot me a PM to help you correct and resubmit it.

Sadly the grammar and spelling ruined this story for me. At some parts entire words were missing and I had to guess. I couldn’t finish reading it, even though the story has potential. It felt rushed and needs improvement! Keep working on your writing and you’ll get there

Spelling........

Was rushed and just had to get the story out my apologies will be getting it fixed and have more coming in the future. The trill of actually sharing my story has me hooked. Thank you for your comments

Very hot

Very sensual, you definitely cherish this woman. Look forward to reading more from you.