All Comments on 'Beach Trip Ch. 01'

I like where this story is going. I hope that there is a follow up soon, as this was a wonderful teaser of where things could go. I always enjoy stories where another opportunity arises that I was not expecting.

Good start don't let the others get ya down.

You got me ready for more!

When will we see part 2?

Disappointed story ended before it was completed. Please continue

I hope more is on the way!

Promising story.

I hope you have a next chapter.

This was a wonderful story it just needed something else... I know how about an ending it just ended as it was starting I am still looking for part 2,3 and however more you want to write you left a lot of room for growth, PLEASE take a moment and finsh this great story

This story is just heating up... I'd like to read more about what happens next