All Comments on 'Beatrix the Wish Granting Fairy'

This story is so funny, be careful what you wish for! lmao. I want a wish fairy! lol.

This story is so funny, be careful what you wish for! lmao. I want a wish fairy! lol.

I typically like more traditional wish-granting stories, and stepped into this one thinking it would be. But instead of being bothered by the comic twist, I really enjoyed it. Very well written. It would be fun to see more of Beatrix.

I loved it. Definitely needs a follow-up now that he's an expert.wisher.

Excellent first attempt with your story! Can't wait to read more from you!

Very nice! I definitely hope we get some sort of follow up to this, or something else along similar lines from you!

I agree with most of the comments I read so far.

This story could easily fall under the sub-heading Humor instead of Mind Control.

The twist ending was hilarious! You cant help but wonder how many times (if any) he called out to Beatrix to end or undo the wish!

I can totally imagine the guy calling out every time he gets a breath & his lips are free for a second & she's just sitting downstairs watching TV.

Also makes you wonder where things will go "the morning after". (will mom think it was a dream/sleep walking? Or will she turn her boy into her 'boy toy'?)

Oh, and I also liked the 'realism' of the moral struggles that cropped up.

Jesus dude, this isn't erotic, this is actual storytelling, and damn good storytelling to!

I wan't more.

Hilarious twist! thankyou :)

Well written, and glad there was a moral dimension as well as the erotic content.

Hilarious! I couldn’t stop laughing after the surprise. 🤣😂🤣