by KarennaC
... and I only gave it 75 instead of 100 because the ending seemed just a little too "pat." I liked the "turn the tables" concept but think it needed a little more work to be convincing. Really good work!
I expected the theme to be a man using hypnosis to get into the girls panties, but 'no', he was a real gentleman throughout and only did what Sophie wanted.
A great read.