All Comments on 'Beautiful Inside'

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SweetLittleLiarSweetLittleLiarabout 15 years ago
Liked this story a LOT

... and I only gave it 75 instead of 100 because the ending seemed just a little too "pat." I liked the "turn the tables" concept but think it needed a little more work to be convincing. Really good work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Surprise Stry

I expected the theme to be a man using hypnosis to get into the girls panties, but 'no', he was a real gentleman throughout and only did what Sophie wanted.

A great read.

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