All Comments on 'Beauty and the Beast'

but you ended it so abruptly. Did she break the curse or not?

While I enjoyed the story, I feel like I read half of it and then jumped to the last page. Did part of the story get lost when posting?

I must agree. I loved the story, but wanted more! I want to know how the father is and the curse and all the other things you could tell. Thanks again for writing. This is the first off many I will read of yours.

need more. ended too fast.

You left a little to the imagination (more like alot) while also giving away alot of information. Usually, I would be really pissed, but I loved your version of Beauty and the Beast. It's perfect the way that it is.

I was really loving this and then it just kind of dead stopped.

This story is absolutely beautiful. I adored it. Thank you so much for writing the best fairytale I've read here so far.

Excellent re-telling, I thoroughly enjoyed it!

intriguess really managed to bring the characters to life.

If I was forced to criticize (at gunpoint)?

"...he wished he wasn't so well endowed..."

No man would ever think that. Not in a million years!

And the ending "...and they lived happily fucking after." contrasts nicely with the poetic sweetness of the rest of the story.

10/10

Very beautiful, I was quite surprised! I have always love twisted fairy tales though and this is one of the best amateur ones I've had the pleasure to read! Hope you keep writing :)