by intriguess
Very beautiful, I was quite surprised! I have always love twisted fairy tales though and this is one of the best amateur ones I've had the pleasure to read! Hope you keep writing :)
Excellent re-telling, I thoroughly enjoyed it!
intriguess really managed to bring the characters to life.
If I was forced to criticize (at gunpoint)?
"...he wished he wasn't so well endowed..."
No man would ever think that. Not in a million years!
And the ending "...and they lived happily fucking after." contrasts nicely with the poetic sweetness of the rest of the story.
10/10
This story is absolutely beautiful. I adored it. Thank you so much for writing the best fairytale I've read here so far.
I was really loving this and then it just kind of dead stopped.
You left a little to the imagination (more like alot) while also giving away alot of information. Usually, I would be really pissed, but I loved your version of Beauty and the Beast. It's perfect the way that it is.
I must agree. I loved the story, but wanted more! I want to know how the father is and the curse and all the other things you could tell. Thanks again for writing. This is the first off many I will read of yours.
While I enjoyed the story, I feel like I read half of it and then jumped to the last page. Did part of the story get lost when posting?
but you ended it so abruptly. Did she break the curse or not?