by dchatterly
This story was so blatantly crude and erotic that I came before the second page. This story must have a ring of truth, nobody could fantasize a scenario like that. Totally loved it.
Fucking wimp ass husband, kill the motherfucking whore, I'd cut the stupid piece of shit slut to little pieces.
To answer your question, yes you should continue in this vein. this was an erotic and hot story well told. Please keep it up.
Experience and motivation trump naïveté and misplaced focus (and a thick prong doesn't hurt - very long)
As a first story ... all be 10 years ago it was direct and flowed. Perhaps a long stay in scotland influenced the grip on my imagination but I came before first page end. My only disapointment was hubby failed to grab the moment and shoot off at least a film roll. Hot story, the beast beliveably portrayed, and the emergence of sex power moment... never judge a book by it's cover comes to mind and the wife's awakening and this i'll teach u attitude calmly, and mainly unsaid portrayed. It's written as fiction critics .
10 y ago with my 5 star award i wud have asked you to keep the words and ideas flowing. Time will tell. Now tho I have all your others to read .... i wish there were MORE !
This big cocked old man is soon going to be visiting your home to fuck your sexy wife in the marital bed and she's going to do any thing to get that big Cock up inside her married vagina including comeing off her birth control when he tells her to he's going then to insist you use condoms while he fucks your wife unprotected and puts her in the family way
Might as well stop now, there was no point to this and it suffered from the lack of a decent writer.
No more excuses for cheating. I won't rate it. I just can't stand this shit any longer.
The guy did not even see that coming - what an idiot - i guess she will fuck who she wants from now on and he wont get any