All Comments on 'Became Slave to My Indian Maid Ch. 01'

Eagerly waiting for next part

Story is good but it will be better if you decrease details of relationship and concentrate on domination. Your narration is slow try to increase the pace. As this is your first post i suggest you to start with short stories and after gaining experience go into series writing. By the way I am also Telugu.

Really loved it. Eagerly waiting

Please continue this story it’s amazing

I hope you continue it. I am officially following you

Eager to read more

was so much fun to read