All Comments on 'Becca XXX Ch. 16 - The Final Chapter'

And a superb epilogue. Well done and roll on the next assignment.

Incredibly well written. Poignant. Thrilling. Thank you for giving us such high quality writing and sticking through with it to the end! Can’t wait to read about becca’s next mission ;)

That was very good. I loved just reading right through both of your stories - good plots, graphic sex - very nice.

Only comment is you could still use some editing - things like there and their. Other than that very well done.

I can hardly wait for Becca's next adventure(s).

If you need an editor, let me know.

What a cracking yarn. Yes it does need a bit of editing some missing words some contextual errors but they didn't detract from the flow of it. Well done.

I had become so enraptured with the story that in the last few chapters I'd stopped masturbating and was reading purely for the story. Then chapter 16 happened to me and the sex scenes where even hotter than the best of the very hot scenes I had enjoyed throughout this long tale. Twice, I ended up on my feet, pumping wildly and spraying my spunk all over my desk and the floor. Jesus, Naughtybecca, not only are you the naughtiest writer I've ever enjoyed, but you have an amazingly broad general knowledge about the world we inhabit and an extremely engaging writing style whatever you are writing about.

Thank you for a wonderful journey that engaged my imagination but that also allowed me to wallow in unrestrained carnal delight. (I can't stop playing with myself as I write this.)

Dear Naughty Becca,

It's a self given title but you surely deserve it. You deserve so much more. Please accept my praise, thank you for this wonderful series, five stars was not nearly enough!

This story made me feel as if I were living it with your characters. I could not put it down. What a story teller you are! You do not disappoint with fresh tension building, bring us to the end. Keep it up. I’m anxiously waiting to start your next, I’m still catching my breath! lol

R

Kiss Kiss Lic Lic

This story is so good I can't seem to put it down. Becca went through a lot but man I will love to be with Becca and Lexa seriously.

Thanks.

All around excellent!

Great story. Can't wait for the movie.

Great story well done Becca love it I agree with em all 5 stars not nearly enough.

Very well done. An easy five stars. I will continue reading your stuff and hope that you continue to write. Brava.

Onwards to the next assignment. Loving your work