by Naughtybecca
Another great chapter is your another of your very sexy series. Keep the chapters cumming! Jim
Fun sex scenes, though not quite as intense as the last chapter, and less suspense than the bus terminal (hard to top that experience), but like how you prep/tease your readers. Becca adventures are literally roller coaster rides, and I can feel we are about to hit another peak.
What an awesome job of playing Simon and Janice to get into the next party! Stephanie is a little minx and I can see Becca wanting to spend more "alone" time with her. I love how you manage your storylines and I agree with the roller coaster comparison. I have never been disappointed by a single chapter since I found you and read everything you have written. You are definitely one who does her research and uses it to enrich her stories. Thank you again for your amazing writing talents and sharing your works with us. As always, I cannot wait for the next release!
Fun! I liked seeing Janice corrupted. I hope Becca gets her in touch with her lesbian side at the orgy.
Nicely done.
The last orgy scene was superbly written. Can't wait to read the next chapter. This installment suggests it's gonna have all the hallmarks of your finest!
Bring it on!
It's all about the structure , I was in retail for years and that was not unusual. But I wouldn't have gone for security. Spoilsport!!