All Comments on 'Becca's Fantasy'

I am not so sure about your second choice of vegies though.

I really liked it, though I think you may want to slack off a bit on the all-caps. It makes a point, and draws attention to those spots, but too much becomes distracting.

What an incredibly hot fantasy....Of course, i will never be able to look at veggies in the same way...lol

James, thank you for sharing and please keep those erotic stories coming. i'll need to share this one with Master!

I think it was good!! I'm not sure about the VEGGIES though. But hey, I guess we all have our preferences!!!!.. I definately think that going from the poop shute to the facial lips is very nasty! Something I would not do, Also any female who cares about her SALLY knows that she can't play around with HARRY after he's been to the chocolate factory..Not a very smart thing to do!! REMEMBER LADIES,3671 DON'T DO THAT OR YOU'LL BE GETTING A VISIT FROM THE COTTAGE CHEESE DISTRIBUORS...LOL Anyway that proves your character wasn't playing to be a slut, She really is!!!

Bravo! Bravo!

Thank you for sharing your story with me. I'm not a "salad" kind of girl, but damn - I need to go shopping and leave my back door open! Wide Open!

Ok....It's been too long... and now I am.. heading to publix to shop for veggies! Now if I could find someone who knows how to use them! Bound :-)

My mom always told me veggies were good for a body!! <wefg> dymond

This was a great story ... except for the anal ... LOL ... very hot ... excellent writing skills ...

Hot stuff.

Bloody marvellous :D

Good story, James, and thank you for pointing me here! I look forward to reading more.

...even though I found several things wrong with the execution of this story, I still favor the plot. One thing bothers me, though. Why don't you ever capitalize the 1st letter in 'becca's' name?

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