All Comments on 'Kate: Becoming a Live-In Slut'

Loved it!

Nice story. I doubt I am alone in hoping to read more about Kate.

If you could add some seduction it would help as Kate jumped so quickly into being a slut. Maybe have Kate bring a shy friend to the Allen home for a weekend. Could Kate's Lesbian friend show up also.?

Just loved…hoping there will be more!

Good story, but please work with an editor. Switching between past and present tense, and using "where" instead of "wear" won't be a problem once you've got someone double-checking things like that for you. Looking forward to your next story! Keep writing.

LOVED IT!!!!! Please, please write more of this story!

Omg this made me cum so many times, please please write more!!!!

Great story. Lots of options to continue

Perfectly written. My submissive personality so embraces hers.

A nice fantasy.