by WhyNotUs
Beautiful and loving story!!!
Either way you consider on the writing sounds good to me!!
Only thing I have to say is you should also try and keep Bella in the loop??!!
I have enjoyed all the variations here. To be honest, the idea of Trent and Jess making Nick, Nicole, is one that's done SO much. But I think it would be hot as ever. I like your writing style for erotica. Good balance of story and sexiness. Giving this one 5 star.
Miss Kira Bangkok