All Comments on 'Becoming Hannah Pt. 01'

Fabulous

Some writers on here would have got to this point in three or four paragraphs. The length and depth of your writing is so, so much more interesting. Please continue.

Georgetown University NOT George Washington University is the Catholic/Jesuit university in DC!

Really liked it. I share some of those fantasies. You brought it all back to life. Memories of pleasing a nice man!

Please continue with Hannah and Ezra. Loves it!

Beautiful...

As a straight man (with brief experience) I found this warm and erotic and everything that I would expect in a loving gay D/s relationship. I admired the subtle details, the imperfect characters and the authenticity. The time period contributed a delightful thematic resonance.

Thank you for the gift of your excellent writing. I am eager to learn what you have in store for the next chapter.

=Alextasy

Well, both the caracters, the elderly Jewish professor and the young Egyptian where, to me, very much realistic, cause I have known both types in Europe and in the Middle East. Please continue, because it is different than what I usually read. My compliments.

Very erotic and realistic. It made me feel ,like I was experiencing a sexual awakening with another man and enjoying the sensations of oral and anal sex for the first time. I don't understand why you are so worried about the reception to this foray into homoerotic literature. It's a beautiful description of two men enjoying each other. I like the realism of your work. Please keep writing.

Thank so much for taking the risk you did and succeeding. Please continue.