All Comments on 'Becoming Hazel's Toy Ch. 02'

I'm sorry, he would never just go along, continuing to talk like he was straight male. This story would be much more interesting if the target fought against her plan. Give her some failures.

Pop off queen.

Hope there’s more to come!

Amazing amazing amazing I love reading stories about slutty boys being shown their place. Josh was born to submit and serve

Ready for part 3!

It started out good but yet again another author that gets off on portraying the femdom as an evil person that just raped a poor unsuspecting boy. You act like he would like it but in reality he would more than likely report his rape and blackmail to the authorities he has enough evidence she would end up in jail and become a registered sexual offender do your research any successful dominant knows you have to follow the rules. Consensual safe without those it's rape

I’m sorry but Hazel broke her word, cheated at chess, and sexually assaulted Josh. Lack of his consent is evident. Such a promising story, too. Sad. J.

"Consent is sexy" is just a joke, it's not actually true. It's tongue and cheek. Nobody thinks it's sexy. Why would someone want to read a story about vanilla, consenual, safe sex? That's not what people fantasize about.

In this mornings news, a local debutante was found bent over a stall at a pony farm getting railed by a Connemara stallion, pictures at 11.

Give me a break.