All Comments on 'Becoming Hers Pt. 01'

Enjoyable start to a journey

Feels like the start of a great romance - looking forward to the next chapter

Nice premise.

Lots of time spent on the backstory. Far too little spent on the sex.

Needed many more step-ny-step details.

Needed dialog about what they were doing to each other. And how it felt.

Four stars for the back story/ setting the scenr.

Two stars for the sex.

Average: three stars.

This ends in cuckolding. It's not a romance series.