All Comments on 'Becoming Joey Ch. 04'

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JD2100JD2100over 7 years ago
yummy

can't wait for girls night out. was another awesomely lovely tale.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
i love this story

wish i was joey

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Hot! Hot! Hot!

Oh, I love it! I'm so jealous of Joey.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Absolutely loved it!

So good! Thank you for writing this! Please continue!

namowanamowaover 7 years ago
wonderful

Beautifully woven to bring out the woman in Joey. This is what happens to girls like us.

LisaJayeLisaJayeover 7 years ago
Is chapter 4 the end ?

Another excellent continuing story that just ends with the promise of another chapter that never happens . Very frustrating to me . Eagerly waiting for chapter 5 , but quickly coming to the conclusion there isn't one . Thank You

First_time_biFirst_time_biover 7 years agoAuthor
It's coming

LisaJaye

First thank you so much for reading my stories. I always appreciate your comments. I was writing fast and furious for the first 4 chapters and hit a lull, which also coincided with the beginning of the baseball playoffs. Go Tribe!

Anyway, the next chapter is coming. Should be finished in the next day or so, with more chapters planned to tell the tale of the continuing transformation both mentally and physically of Joey. Sorry for the delay

BrendaNWBrendaNWover 7 years ago
so nice

I wish I had wonderful friends like that when I was growing up..

Riki1942Riki1942about 4 years ago
Different than any orgasm before.

I know what you mean about it being "different than any orgasm before." The first time you cum from being fucked and have an anal orgasm you will be addicted for life.

I get a roaring in my ears, things go gray, I feel like I'm going to pass out, my sphincter clamps down over and over in orgasmic spasms on his cock, my whole body shakes and it can happen even if I have already had a regular orgasm and my cock has gone soft!

I think, for me, it's a psychological thing because it only happens when I am all made up and and dressed like a girl. It also seems to only happen when I'm getting fucked bareback and he cums inside me or I know that he is going to.

AmeliaJonesAmeliaJonesabout 3 years ago

Mmm kinda wishing I was Joey devouring Matt’s delicious cock.

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I am 52 years old. I enjoy writing D/s related material from the submissive point of view. This is my first shot at writing erotica, but hope to hone my skills as I continue. I live in Arizona, but travel throughout the west, mostly to Denver, SLC, Vegas, Seattle, Portland ...

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