All Comments on 'Becoming Joey Ch. 06'

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JD2100JD2100over 7 years ago
loved it

keep em coming as I would love to be in Joey's position!

IrvingParkeIrvingParkeover 7 years ago

Anonymous wishes that their comment was their own reality.

FirstwithUFirstwithUover 7 years ago
Mom was to accepting

Good story so far but mother was to accepting of the changes. Plus turning her son/daughter over to Susan and Matt with no reservations...just not believable. But hey it's all fantasy so keep up the good work

kuk4yookuk4yooover 7 years ago
Thanks for Writing.

Thanks for writing.

Enjoying the character development. Love the positive feel between them.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
It's nice for mom too

Thinking that mom would like to play with her she male daughter?

rnebularrnebularover 7 years ago
Like it but...

Really like the stores, the characters and the exploration. The only complaint I have is that you switched from first person to third person, which can be jarring to a reader. Most of this series is in the first person, so just try to keep that consistent throughout. Keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
liking this

wish it was me only not the gay sex

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
like this

i feel most guys have a fem side to explore

Luckyb1964Luckyb1964over 7 years ago
Love some Joey

Please keep going this is one of my favorite stories of all time love love love it!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
it helps me

hi what a wonderful story ,wishing i had that chance to discover my self at that age , with that amount of love and support . i have a amazing loving and understanding wife , who is going to support me in my possible transition. thank you so much for this story i really hope to read more in this story. wishing you lots of love in life.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Love this story

I do so love this story please do not stop here I really would love to see where it goes from here.

300bowler300300bowler300almost 7 years ago
LIKE EVERY ONE SELF

I HOPE THERE'S MORE TO THIS STORY, AND A LOT MORE THAN 1 OR 2 CHAPTERS, YOU ARE A VERY GOOD WRITER...

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Please continue this story!

This story is so good and I would really love to read more!

mrjack4u56mrjack4u56over 5 years ago
Such a great story

I wasn't ready for it to end... As a bisexual submissive male that has fantasized about being feminized by a couple like them, I got so totally caught up in Joey's transformation. Thank You 😘

DeborahAnneDeborahAnneabout 4 years ago
Wonderful

If only that had happened to me when I was 17 and getting ready to join the military. I was only 5 ft 10 inches was so light in weight that I had to put change in my pockets to pass the minimum weight class. I had already been wearing female clothes that I obtained from the neighbors clothes lines. I was already a cock sucker thanks in part to my step dad, but I had sucked the head of my cock and swallowed my cum for awhile. The sudden stop when on active duty was very hard to do. I lasted a little over a year before finally getting a chance to suck cock. da.cd@frontier.com

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I am 52 years old. I enjoy writing D/s related material from the submissive point of view. This is my first shot at writing erotica, but hope to hone my skills as I continue. I live in Arizona, but travel throughout the west, mostly to Denver, SLC, Vegas, Seattle, Portland ...

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