All Comments on 'Becoming Joey Ch. 07'

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DeborahAnneDeborahAnneabout 4 years ago
Very good

Nice doctor but not for me, I tried to be a woman from a Wednesday thru Sunday morning for 9 or ten years at the "Be All" conventions. Loved the times but it was also a lot of hard work to be a lady during those times. Sort of wish I could do so again but after retiring I do not have that extra overtime cash. I hope you will continue as we all want to know how Joey does. da.cd@frontier.com

Riki1942Riki1942about 4 years ago
Breasts

How I would love to have real breasts! I use nipple pumps and my nipples are large and sensitive and I love them sucked and played with. I use the breast adhesive to glue my silicone breast forms to my chest and love the feel of the weight of them tugging on my chest. I wish they were real and actually had feeling in them and didn't cover my own nipples up so I could have them played with at the same time.

biazmbiazmabout 1 year ago

Please keep this series found. You are doing such a great job

mcseminolemcseminole10 months ago

I have read several of your stories and have greatly enjoyed. However there is one aspect that is consistently frustrating for me; the sex seems to be hurried. The length and detail of the foreplay and undressing always seems to be 2-3 times that of the detail of the act. Your premises and build up are truly fantastic and I would love for you to give us a bit more of the sex. Please take this criticism as it is intended as I really enjoy your work and hope to see more of Joey.

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I am 52 years old. I enjoy writing D/s related material from the submissive point of view. This is my first shot at writing erotica, but hope to hone my skills as I continue. I live in Arizona, but travel throughout the west, mostly to Denver, SLC, Vegas, Seattle, Portland ...

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