All Comments on 'Becoming Just Another Family Ch. 03'

What happens when Rachel gets pregnant.

I wondered why Ryan did not have sex with this older sister and chose Rachel instead.

A beautiful time together.

Looking forward to the next chapters.

"Becoming Just Another Family Ch. 04:" - Looking over to my right, I see there's a chapter 04!! Very good, as this story, through chapter 03, has progressively gotten better, exponentially with a very nice, warm and seemingly heart-felt theme throughout the chapter.

Over the years I've read some "dawgs" on Literotica, and I've read some top-notch, epic renditions of professionalism. But, once I started a story I've slugged myself through every one of them, no matter how awful the story, the theme, the characters, the writer's ability (or not), and always finished through until the end. This was one of those stories, in chapter 01, when I thought I might have difficulty finishing the story. I'm glad I pushed onward, and now will gladly proceed to the last chapter 04.

The character of Ryan finally has revealed his heart, his compassion, his deep love, and his want-to to please "his girl," his sister, his lover!! Rachel has also expressed her appreciation. Ryan still needs to man-up and present his outward appearance more maturely and manly.