All Comments on 'Becoming Monsters 1: Ch. 15'

Good chapter.

Comedy is not as powerful without tragedy. Need to cry so we can laugh.

Well there's a bit of a gut punch of a chapter. Not bad, but definitely a tonal shift. I'm going to guess that Church has footage of Honoka transforming, which he'll either use to blackmail them or just expose them. Excellent chapter

Awesome character development and bringing things to a head for a bit

DRAMA! The good kind. Please, if you are going to do a Fae harem member, no elves, pixies, sprites but no elves please.

“No elves!”

I won’t say never, but I hope my stuff makes it clear I don’t go vanilla.

Love the story... do you have to hurt my heart though?

The first skirmish. In the bullying war, you can't beat cubic muscle, as so deftly proven by Honoka in her holstaur form. I can't wait to see how she changes as the war continues toward resolution. My bets are on the developing guild.... This is fun to contemplate! A magical world gone mad tamed by a hermaphrodite and her minions on a crusade,,,,