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All Comments on 'Becoming Monsters: Tidbits 10'

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AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Eagerly awaiting your next chapter. Enjoy the characters in your stories

Timtom12Timtom126 months ago

I understand not spelling everything out, but it's hard for the more obtuse of us.

Loving the series.

OtterlyMindblowingOtterlyMindblowing6 months agoAuthor

@Timtom12

Which bit was not clear? My point of view as the author is a bit different from yours as the reader, so other than a couple of deliberate points I genuinely do not know if I’m saying it right. Glad you’re enjoying the story!

Rhino77PIlotRhino77PIlot5 months ago

At this point in the musical score, the bass line would be: dom ta-dom dom. Sergeant Joe Friday would appear and deliver his famous line, Just the facts, ma'am, just the facts." Todd has opened his inquiry, so whatever plot is afoot is about to be spoilt. (Eyeroll).

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As just about all of you who follow me know, AiLovesToGrow has passed away. She was a friend and mentor to me, beyond just creating the Becoming Monsters world I love to write in. Her Book Two is incomplete, and will remain that way. I cannot finish them for her and to try wou...