All Comments on 'Becoming My Little Brother's Toy Ch. 04'

Chris still being flaccid after enjoying the sights and groping her makes it sound like he wasn't enjoying it very much

Il semble temps de faire intervenir les parents dans l'éducation de de leur fille ! ....

Lmao I know it sounds funny coming from me. But why does the guy who resorts to blackmail want to watch and share???

Ruined the whole story by adding his friend

Thoroughly enjoyable, and very well written.

Fantastic writing love the seduction into being an owned slut

Didn't like the sharing

And that's how you ruin a good story. 1/5

I expected that they would want second servings of her.

So hot!

Not a fan of the sharing she's my property why would I share her

Looking forward to reading the rest and checking out some of your other works. Keep them cumming!!!!!!!

Ooooppppssssssss...3/5 Stars for this one...I am not liking this sharing his loving sister who loves him enough to submit to him...

Chris is an interloper...should not be trusted to keep his mouth closed, there is too much temptation to blab!!

Now, sharing one of her girlfriends, THAT is different (from a man's POV, of course...I AM a sexist and pervert, after all!!)

Hope next chapters fare better!

To the authors of those whiney comments complaining about the addition of Chris-

Tristian's primary goal was to get back at his older sister for humiliating him years ago by treating him like a slave when their parents left her in charge. Tristian wants to avenge his past humiliation, and in his now hormone flooded mind, wants to use sex as the ultimate humiliation. Bringing Chris into the mix just humiliates Erin more, thus making his revenge that much sweeter. He can now gloat in front of Erin and Chris.

Ever hear someone brag about an improbable accomplishment, and someone else respond, "pictures or it didn't happen?" Chris is the equivalent of pictures.

Nickisilvers, this is a great telling of a woman discovering the joys of sexual submission. Just happens to be my fantasy woman, although C cups would be fine. Larger results in back trouble for her. And, over time excessive sag, which can give her body image issues. P.S. I like 'em perky, myself

Angus

Sorry to the author but this is where I stopped reading. This story was moving along so good till an outsider was added. I am not a fan of pimping out the submissive sister to others because this is something that is between the two siblings. This is as much a turn off as when other authors write a good story about siblings falling in love then ruining the story by including parents and even grandparents. The other chapters were 4/5 but this was 1/5.