All Comments on 'Becoming My Little Brother's Toy Ch. 09'

by nickisilvers

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littlewilly1littlewilly19 months ago

Love to read your spin offs

KidG1000KidG10009 months ago

Really loving it. The spin-off sounds really hot. After this chapter i just want to see all four of them in an family orgy

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

I know its cliche but id love for Erin to get pregnant in the end

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

I hope we get to find out why Tristan doing this and to see that Erin confesses that she likes to be treated that way. I wouldn't mind if they continue after their confessions the same dynamic but this time a bogus reason that both of them knows it's fake and they just pretend.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

fan tass tick. keep them cumming

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

👏👏👏

redlion75redlion759 months ago

Just let the parents find out and be OK with it but leave them out of their relationship

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Another great chapter. I'm hoping that in the Final chapter there will be a little shock, like her becoming Pregnant and they move away and live as husband and wife. Or mom Catches them and joins in..

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Can't wait for the next chapter. Hoping at the end of the deal he does Erase the blackmail info, and she ask to become his sex slave for everever, Exclusively.

Is there anyway you can give us a couple more chapters on "HUMILIATED BY MY NEW GIRL BOSS" story??

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Maybe she could become the family sex slave. Taking care of mom and dad too..

MikeOrMikeyMikeOrMikey9 months ago

Another 5 star story. I can’t wait for the others.

stockingnutstockingnut9 months ago

Another great chapter! Can’t wait to see how this ends.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Gave up when she walked down the bitch in her bikini

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

I've enjoyed this the most. I would introduce a boyfriend for Erin and girlfriend for Tistan and allow parents to get caught fucking them only to be blackmailed by both Tristan and Erin

pappyboyingtonpappyboyington9 months ago

I would love it more if Erin and Tris kept to themselves. Maybe he'll let her do the housework naked or he'll put a vibration egg in her and give her vibraton-codes, for example for sex, blow and so on.

I liked the chapter again.

with mother and father please only in the spin-off.

Rifraff123Rifraff1239 months ago

I enjoyed the series! I do hope dad gets a turn!

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Absolutely loved this, have everyone fucking everyone, a red hot multi fuck, with the women making out with each other, while the cocks are getting ready to go again. Cunt crazed fucker, Lancashire, UK.

tool1952tool19529 months ago

A rather enjoyable erotic story, but please check your spelling more closely, or use a Literotica editor as another pair of eyes to catch errors, before going live. Misspelling beach with bitch, twice in the same sentence, reflects poorly on you, when you've worked so hard to craft a fine story. Keep up the good work, but be more careful... spelling does count!

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Loved your story. A 3 way with mom, son and daughter would be cool as would a father daughter mother 3way. Just hot

sirgrunt99sirgrunt999 months ago

that would be fun if it turned out that they were not real brothers and sisters but the brother had found out before he found out about that car. or if he blindfolded her and cuffed her to his bed and the father found her like that.

GortmundyGortmundy8 months ago

Great story. I like it that she is actually enjoying herself and its not simply another tale of witless abuses. I must admit to being a bit of a sucker for HEA endings so here's hoping.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

When is the next one coming out?? Waiting for it

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

It's amazing. I am also waiting for stepdaughter and step dad story.

pappyboyingtonpappyboyington8 months ago

I'm already waiting for the next part. When can we expect?

Dirtymindedman64Dirtymindedman648 months ago

I liked it so much. I think the parents are involved. Both of their children enjoyed watching them screw. I think it's more thrilling to be surprised so let your creative juices flow, have fun with it.

TEXASMADDOGTEXASMADDOG7 months ago

"I THINK"...Mom and Dad already know about the car wreck, and have accepted what happened as a 'life lesson's for BOTH kids...Tristan is really taking advantage of Erin (not that she doesn't like it!!)

So. Where do they go from here...we will see...

Five Stars!!✨✨✨✨✨

Angus_of_AngushireAngus_of_Angushire6 months ago

In my mind, Dad already knows about the car wreck and as punishment, Dad encourages Tristen to dominate Erin.

Angus

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