All Comments on 'Becoming My Little Brother's Toy'

5 Stars. This is gonna be fun!

Way too short, story not developed enough, surely this has a longer life then this short window. doesn't say ch. 1. This barely tells anything about their lives up till now and certainly only a hint of what might happen. Too little for one to suggest what cums next as you should have ownership for what is written a lot further then what has been offered so far.

Good start. is it just depends on how kinky the author wants to make Tristan and his big-titted sister.

I gave you a 4 because it's a good story. Most stories I read I just dump as soon as the blackmailing begins. It's just so filthy and contemptible it ruins a story.

Devious little shit!

HoHum nothing very special here. Hope it gets much better.

Please keep writing.

The two I have read so far are titillating.

I love your descriptive style. I can see them being deliciously bad.

Consider a teacher/student scenario please.

Very nice. But in a natural environment, this would happen at more tealistic ages, say, she could be a junior in high school (year 11) and he a freshman (year 9). That would make it more believable for me, but as we all know, the riles don't allow it

Devious little fuck! But 34DD, would make me drool and…. Hot

Angus_of_angushire is right but it's still working for me 5⭐

See some drool over 34DD and some like won't read anymore of your stories because of it. I didn't read past that text. Writers don't tell us what we see, let our minds fill in the blanks. I like tiny tits, fat tits turn me off so I quit reading. If you had just said beautiful hits I would have kept going, at least until you said his 10" cock or red bull thickness or some other BS. Let us readers have or imagination, its always better and nobody is turned off

I hate this auto correct it changes without me being able to correct

I really dislike blackmail stories.

I'm aroused by a story of a girl who wants to play, not forced to!

Nice start. Looking forward to the rest of the series.

Recently finding your work. A very nice start. A good premise.

Love the comments here...all over the place, yet mostly positive.

34DD boobs/10" cock...overstated...yet it IS fantasy, so...

I will keep reading, see how the next chapters go... will be an interesting (6) months for both siblings!!

Five **5**Stars!!

A "little bro's" near foot long thingy is gonna leave a mark. I don’t see the attraction of that proportion. Maybe it's just visual. I get that. Same thing with some guys for big hooters, i guess.

Good first chapter, by the way.