All Comments on 'Becoming Sharon Ch. 01'

I was All In till the shit-eatin .....

Absolutely loved it…

More Curvy Sharon the better..I’ve also been a fan of hers for ages…👍

I like your work but that one's not for me, sorry not a shit eater

In all honesty, I think the writing in this story is at its absolute best before the shitting starts. It's subtle, complex, and understated, and the point of view is mature and complex. The writing really is impressive. The writing is never less than "very good" once the coprophagia begins, but I think some of the subtlety and complexity of the prose is lost. The shit-eating is not to my personal taste, but the author gave clear advance warning, so I won't deduct any points for his choice of subject. I think I admire this story more than I actually like it, but I do admire it a good deal.