by dalespeer
with the one exception that you advertised this as a more "normal" process, and the speed of removing the adam's apple is way too fast. No one would suggest that so early in the process (and then it would be a trach. shave) since voice lessons can easily change a voice without removing the adam's apple! :)
Nice concept, but your use of the language is rough, and the construction is choppy.
I don't know of any transexuals who get their hormones while drab on their first visit with a therapist.I takes a Dr to prescribe, the therapist only does some preliminary screening that can take several months. This whole thing was just to quick to be realistic.