All Comments on 'Bedroom. Now.'

It’s extremely rare a story so short excites me the way this did. I admit, I even have a bias and typically avoid anything less than a 5K word count… so fucking bravo love. This was exquisite, you’ve got a gift.

Welcome to Literotica, darling, you’re very much among like minded company. I’ll definitely be keeping an eye on you.

- Seraph

The was very well done! So much was left to the reader's imagination EXCEPT how she felt. Which was particularly intense. I like it. Will be looking forward to more from you.

A nit to pick. Names, including nicknames, should be capitalized. Thinking of Babygirl, obviously.

Brilliantly written and incredibly arousing! Well done...

Thanks for sharing your imagination and skill

Loved how there was no cursing or vulgarity. Loved how he climaxed. Well written and scandalously erotic for such a short story. Well done.

That was steamy as fuck. Bravo, bravo. 5 stars

Damn good! I will be reading more of your work. RT

jeez that's fucking hot. so rare when a story makes me sad that i'm not a woman