All Comments on 'Bedtime Story Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Well-written!

This story was well-written and tastefully thought out. The situation was realistic. An excellent portrayal of the submissive's emotions. I'd like to see this piece expanded into a longer story. Good premise for a novella.

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