All Comments on 'Beetlesmith's Ch. 06'

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CeliaisAliena almost 13 years ago

A sensuous acceleration towards trouble

Some very funny lines tossed in the mix, as well as the sensuous hum of dirty morning sex, debauched dinner arrangements and other plans for a troubled tomorrow!

Anonymousalmost 13 years ago

A nice build up- the next chapter should be dynamite!

Short and sweet by your standards- only a couple of pages long. But the tension mouunts. Nice work- looking forward to whatever's next....

and it sounds like that will be increasingly freaky.

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Reading between the lines - it is the curse of every writer and the duty of every reader. Erotica without porn is just tawdry fiction. Porn without erotica is just boring. My reaction to porn films is as follows: after the first ten minutes, I want to go home and screw. Afte...

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