by CorruptingPower
I've never commented on a story before, but I appreciate this one and the others you write. Thanks!
Great chapter. I hope you will elaborate on the storing of consciousness in the future.
Glad to see you decided to continue this story. After reading Chapter 1, I was hooked!
Absolutely great story to go with your others! I hope you intend to continue this storyline!
??? 'Serena snapped a kick, planting her boot straight in the man's stomach, as he suddenly bowled over in pleasure.' I'm sorry, bowled over in pleasure? From a kick to the gut? That doesn't make any sense.
Never knew a kick tk the gut was pleasurable but, hey, I'm not ann asteroid miner. Rolling along very nicely, thank you.