All Comments on 'Before The Storm (Ch. 06)'

Never knew a kick tk the gut was pleasurable but, hey, I'm not ann asteroid miner. Rolling along very nicely, thank you.

Can Helen's consciousness also be stored in the Akasha?

??? 'Serena snapped a kick, planting her boot straight in the man's stomach, as he suddenly bowled over in pleasure.' I'm sorry, bowled over in pleasure? From a kick to the gut? That doesn't make any sense.

Please more, I am prepared to beg if necessary !

This is such a good storey can’t wait for the next instalment.

Absolutely great story to go with your others! I hope you intend to continue this storyline!

Glad to see you decided to continue this story. After reading Chapter 1, I was hooked!

👍Stay safe

Great chapter. I hope you will elaborate on the storing of consciousness in the future.

I've never commented on a story before, but I appreciate this one and the others you write. Thanks!