All Comments on 'Before the Wedding'

Usually I am not a fan of short stories or short chapters. However this was well written and really grabbed me from the beginning. Part of the reason I typically don't read short is because now I have to wait, I want to know what lead to this, what happens next. 5*

Should have waited until you had a better written story...chronic masterbaters always write poor stories

Good start. Keep going with another part(s?).

Too much of the story was devoted to Paul waking up and nothing was said about how he ended up with Jessica in his bed or how she had always been a fantasy of his, or anything..... Could have been a one paragraph story.

"**Note: this is the first portion of a longer story I've been working on."

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No chapter number in the title to warn this wasn't a complete story BEFORE opening always earns a rating of 1.

Let's see the rest of the story, a little more explanation of how this ended up happening. Why Jessica is such a slut. lol

I'm looking forward to reading more. But please don’t give us an unending string of single page installments like this. 5/5

Its a very good start, don't worry about the people complaining about it being short or not numbered. The story is very compelling with the perfect amount of sexual tension. I cant wait to read more of these two.

Looking Forward to reading more.