All Comments on 'Beginning Anew'

Really loved the writing style and how you introduced their relationship, although I think the story would have benefited from a bit more time between Marcus arriving and his immediate jump to being a cockslut. Hope you continue this storyline, it was hot af

Please keep writing!!!

Can not wait for the next chapter

oh for a neighbour like that!

More please! Blew my sissy seed reading your tale! So very nice!

please more

"Natalie" like in "Natalie Mars"? ;)

I LOVE THIS STORY! YOU MUST GIVE US MORE! 💥💥💥🔥🔥🔥🔥💋💋💋💋😛

Damn i really hope this gets a second chapter, Loved everything about it

you hit it out of the park again

Do his parents know that Natalie is futa?

I thought it was awesome, & even though you thought it might be a one of, would love a sequel.

All of your work is excellent, but, PLEASE, consider writing a third installment of Motherly Grudge. This series is the gold standard of futanari lit.

Hope you write a sequel!

Great story don't think it needs a part 2 but I will love to see more work from you. Read pretty much all of your stories

Great story

Great story so far. I'd love to read a 2nd(-3rd-4th-...) chapter on what Natalie has planned for them, and maybe even see the transformation of Marcus to Marie ;-)

😋 what a gooey good story!

Such a great story, lots of good detail and I enjoyed it quite thoroughly, so thank-you for sharing!

I like your way of writing not so rough sex it is more passion and express how she love him so much . I read your stories and want you or any other to suggest me other story like this (romantic devolved to dominance ) including such good dialogues.

This is one of my all time favorite stories on Lit! I so very much want a sequel!

I really wish the males in the futa stories weren’t all so “oh I’m basically just a fuck toy”....would be nice to get some at least illusion of equality in the relationship and have the guy penetrating the futa as well.

This story is awesome !

I really wish a sequel to find out what Nathalie has in store for Marcus during the vacations and on their lifestyle settings.

I was done on by the duet.

Tho i do wish more time had been given to his realization that what he thought was condescension was actually flirtation.

Excellent story ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

Awesomely amazing

A really good story. I hope you will post more, and maybe a sequel?

Great relationship story. I hope you do a sequel to it.

Sequel pls

Meravigliosa storia... Mi sarebbe piaciuto tantissimo da ragazzo poter vivere un'esperienza così dolce e piacevole con un'amica speciale di famiglia come Natalie... Penso sia un'esperienza che ti cambia la vita e ti apre un mondo completamente nuovo di sesso e nel loro caso anche di amore disinteressato... Marcus è davvero un ragazzo fortunato ad avere una trans che lo ha voluto iniziare e gli ha dato tutto di se stessa... Fino ad entrare dentro di lui... Un sogno che molti, per realizzarlo almeno in parte, hanno dovuto pagare, e non è la stessa cosa... Anch'io ho avuto varie esperienze con trans, alcune positive, altre un po' meno, e comunque non me ne pento, anzi...

I think it's beautiful and gives us some hope that everyone has someone no matter how different you are from the world you see!

Wow I love this story. I’m so disappointed it ended. Would love to see how the story continues when his parents got back home.

Too one sided. Laughable that his parents would take a 6 week vacation. Who gets that much time unless you're filthy rich and then the servants would have taken care of him. And given their size difference and his virginity he would have been going to the hospital for surgery to repair his sphincter. Badly thought out even for a fictional porn story. One star

Couldn't stop reading. Wishing she was my neighbor. Please finish the story and take me where you want it to go. Please finish

This was awesome

A super delicious & erotic story. I would love to be Marcus. Wow! That would be so much fun. While reading the story I was thinking his mom knew Natalie was a trans & also knew her son was gay/straight. She & Natalie planned this time as a kind of sexual basic training for Marcus in order for him to realize & accept who he is.

Please write a ch2 of this hot story.

Definitely one of the best stories on this site! It was a great ride, filled with a bit of emotion, character depth, and pretty hot at the end! My only critique is that there aren't any more chapters to read, especially since you left the ending so tantalizingly open to showing us what they'll be up to the next couple of weeks. Please continue writing this story! (If you want to)

This story is everything you can want from a trans love story…it’s erotic, well written, great characters and just an overall good premise and story. A must read!