All Comments on 'Begum of Bilasgarh Pt. 01'

by SargonofNukkad

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Good Arc, Average Drama

Your Arc and premise are really interesting. I felt that the writing could have paced at a slower pace. It somehow felt rushed through.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Slowdown

Interfaith stories are rare to see nowadays... I'm always excited to read such stories... it seems you are Going too fast... slow it down... add more eroticness... add more dialogues...

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

It's a very beautiful story of pure and pious love

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Behind Ghazi Bedridden's rise to power was love, devotion, and sexual charm of his beautiful wife , Begum Rupkatha.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Non Muslim girls who marry Muslim boys never object when their sons are circumcised. This is because they know the pleasure that a circumcised penis gives to a woman

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Specializes in medieval history erotic tales. Follow for something interfaith, reluctant eroticas. Cheers mate!