All Comments on 'Behavioral Rehab Pt. 01'

A great foundation for future works - I enjoyed it immensely; arrogance and attitude pacified by a paddle.

good start, great story. you might add a little more humiliation. Maybe shaving and deliberate arousal for public display. possibly more than just two people seeing them naked.

First page was soooo boring. Did not get much better.

This was great. I hope this continues and you continue your other series.

Harry: Thanks for your feedback; this is hopefully just a springboard for future works in this series; hope you will come back and check them out.

Enslaver: Thanks very much for the suggestions. There will for sure be more humiliation in future installments.

Anon1: The beginning was intended to set up a quasi-realistic world where these kinds of sentences would be handed out and preview the kinds of people who would be subject to them them; it could be your neighbor, your doctor, or a celebrity, for example. Sorry to hear it didn't work for you; I wish I knew what types of stories are your favorites so I could get a better sense of why it didn't appeal to you (and perhaps others).

Anon2: Thank you! I do want to continue this; and this is a good reminder that I have another series that could be completed as well!

Well done! An enjoyable read. :)

I enjoyed this story very much. I look forward to any of Cassidy's future misdeeds as well as the inevitable violations of other women in the community!

a good read. Really liked the way you took your time in setting the scene & building the story. Look forward to reading more. Thanks

goo

Good start to a story that has certainly got great potential. I would have expected more expression of her embarrassment at being told to strip when a male councilor was in the room watching but otherwise nice writting and I don't agree with one comment about the first part - not boreing at all for me.