All Comments on 'Behind Closed Doors Ch. 01'

I would love to see a chapter 2 where she doesn't call him, but he keeps coming over. I would love to see her pregnant, and Kieth falls in love with her for real and marries her. She never really loves him, but she becomes his 1950's style wife because she has to.

I loved this story. Bring on chapter 2.

Amaziiinnglly Gooooddd ... One Of The Best I Have Read ... Please Bring On Chapter 2

@nakedbeast Thank you!

@ ellienora I like your idea, now lets see if I can write it

Liking this, let's have more please, just dying to see how it all pans out.

It's been a while I am looking for a story like this one.

Straight to the point, no bullshit about the girl ending enjoying it, no false reluctance.

He simply takes what he wants and uses and exploits her submissiveness, weakness and innocence.

Please make the taking of her other cherry holes memorable as well.

Nice to hear you all liked it. Chapter 2 is almost finished so should be coming soon.

Glad to hear I provided you such joy, assman, and your detailed feedback, sounds like you had a good time! It's nice to hear from my readers. Chapter two is ready, so feel free to check it out when you have recovered.

Oh this is well written, thank you heaps! I am a sucker for this style of noncon a man taking what he wants

Thanks so much!

Man, this is sadistic as fuck.

But, I am going to continue reading...

amazing. i hope lucy got more tears.

Really good pacing and a very hot scenario. Great job!