All Comments on 'Behind the Mask Ch. 06'

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Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bcabout 1 year ago

Writing style still strong but you overplayed with the heart defect ploy. As a veteran, there is no amount of string pulling that would allow August to serve with a heart transplant. Transplant recipients need anti-rejection drug treatment the rest of their lives, a definite no-no for combat troops, especially special forces. 4*

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