All Comments on 'Behind the Scenes with Mom Ch. 03'

by angellz

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LabiaLoveLabiaLoveabout 3 years ago
Great

Really enjoying the pace and subtle sexuality of this one. Seems very natural and believable - I’m sure at least one onlyfans is being photographed by a son. Looking forward to the next few chapters.

grayge37grayge37about 3 years ago

And the tease continues. Time for a little "action."

angellzangellzabout 3 years agoAuthor
Thanks for reading grayge37 and LabiaLove

I know what you mean, the 'action' will come. I'm just a big fan of the 'teasing'. More will be delivered in the next chapter and I hope you enjoy it... however, at the moment I'm thinking chapter 5 will have the actual 'action'.

LabiaLove, I know. There's got to be right? It's pretty hot to think about and I'm just hoping I can do justice to that premise.

serialscribblerserialscribblerabout 3 years ago
Like the long build-up

I love the lingering build-up, and would love to hear from Mom's diary again, as in the first installment. Nice work!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Amazing story

Finally a believable story on here. Great plot and very well written!

Keep up the reluctance from the mother so the story is realistic.

Great job

angellzangellzabout 3 years agoAuthor
Noted serialscribbler

I saw your comment in a previous chapter too. I have something prepared for next chapter and Mom's diary. Thanks for reading.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Great build up

Can't wait for the action. LOL

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Awesome plot

Looking forward for the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Amazing build up

Keep the slow pacing it is great!

I hope she doesn't just jump on his dick straight away like every other story on here.

I agree with the earlier comment, let him gradually break down her walls, let her feel regret, reluctance, shyness etc.

You are a great writer and this story has great potential. I look forward to chapters to come. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Amazing story line! Please continue!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Where’s the next part?

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