by angellz
Really enjoying the pace and subtle sexuality of this one. Seems very natural and believable - I’m sure at least one onlyfans is being photographed by a son. Looking forward to the next few chapters.
I know what you mean, the 'action' will come. I'm just a big fan of the 'teasing'. More will be delivered in the next chapter and I hope you enjoy it... however, at the moment I'm thinking chapter 5 will have the actual 'action'.
LabiaLove, I know. There's got to be right? It's pretty hot to think about and I'm just hoping I can do justice to that premise.
I love the lingering build-up, and would love to hear from Mom's diary again, as in the first installment. Nice work!
Finally a believable story on here. Great plot and very well written!
Keep up the reluctance from the mother so the story is realistic.
Great job
I saw your comment in a previous chapter too. I have something prepared for next chapter and Mom's diary. Thanks for reading.
Keep the slow pacing it is great!
I hope she doesn't just jump on his dick straight away like every other story on here.
I agree with the earlier comment, let him gradually break down her walls, let her feel regret, reluctance, shyness etc.
You are a great writer and this story has great potential. I look forward to chapters to come. Thanks