All Comments on 'Behind the Scenes with Mom Ch. 04'

by angellz

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TabooTales1TabooTales1about 3 years ago

Honestly, the first four chapters felt like one chapter and it would have worked better than way. Probably would have made fans happier that way, too, because they would have gotten some meat to go with the potatoes of the OnlyFans-like account being started and progression from fairly tame to more revealing pics.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Awesome story so far I hope the next chapter is released quickly the last one took way to long

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Should have given more stars, ending was disappointing. ..write another chapter with a better conclusion.

serialscribblerserialscribblerabout 3 years ago

Very nice progression. I like the building anticipation!

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